River Once - Roni Glaser - movement 2
It's about time I learnt to play this piece I wrote/have been writing. Maybe if I document it here I'll do better at learning it.
Here's a video of the current state of affairs.
Maybe some clear objectives might be a good idea:
- Watch this video to identify problematic bits and mark them on the score.
- Practise them till they're easy.
- ...make another video, go back to step 1....
That was easily said, let's hope the same for done.
Any tips or comments are appreciated. Wish me luck!
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I LOVED that, Roni! Here are some of the things that strike me about it:
- The title - I'm not sure why you call it that, but it does have a sense of a flowing river to it, especially the way a river morphs and changes as it flows.
- It was longish, but it kept my interest right to the end. I kept wondering, "Where is this going to go next?"
- The dynamic changes were awesome. If anything, I'd say make them more extreme.
- It had cohesion, but also variety and surprise.
- There were obviously some flubs, but your ability to execute all those slurs was pretty amazing.
I would not dare to offer any tips. I will say that there is a video lesson on the pre-recorded side that may be of some help. It's by William Kanengiser on the piece El Rio (The River) by Ernesto Garcia de Leon. Like your piece (which also has the word "river" in the title), this piece has a lot of slurs from open strings, and I think he talks about how to execute that type of slur well (which you're already doing, but it still might prove useful). I hope that helps.
Great work, and I hope we get to hear the other movements!