Group 1

Mike if you click the 3 dots to the right of your post then you can just edit your post.

Mark Hi Mark! I just wachted your video. Great Job!! I like very much your consistency on the sound and how you are able to keep the tempo.

There is one thing you can improve. In this exercise you can choose your tempo. I suggest two different tempi (slow and fast). I suggest you to practise it increasing your tempo gradually. Starting from 120 bmp and adding 10 notch everytime untill you reach the 300. I said that because when you played the fast exercice you started losing a bit of control, and the way the work on that is practising gradually. For sure you are going to feel more secure with this exercice and very soon is going to work much better! Keep doing this amazing job!

Sage 

Hi Sage. Attached you can find the exercise (5b). Just put the notes as suggested. Let me know if it helps you, otherwise I will write it for you. Cheers

Eduardo Inestal that is exactly what I needed. Thank you!!

Steve Price Hi Steve, Thank you very much for your video! Nice work! You kept the Tempo great!

A couple of things: 

LH: it is much easier if you let your fingers on the strings. You are going to avoid the possibility of making mistake, is gonna take less effort and let you be concentrate on the RH. What I use to say to my stundents: Be "Lazy". Move yourself as less as possible!!!

RH: The movements of your fingers are pretty good. Maybe you can try not to move your RH at all. Only fingers. It usually happen when you play with your M finger. Try one again to be "lazy". Let me know if it works and if you feel confortable. Cheers

Nick Hi Nick! Well done! I like very much how your fingers move (both hands). Great job. The only thing I would suggest is, try to master the rhythm. Be able to play the whole exercise without going out of the patters and without making mistake. Why? if we make mistake while practising (what is absolutly normal) and keep playing, our "hands and head" are going to asume that we played right and is going to fix this movement. For instance, if we play and make a mistake, we stop and try again, trying to fix the problem Identify Problem and you get the solution. 

But regarding technik, Awesome!!

Eduardo Inestal that makes sense I will work on it. I have a problem recording myself. I crack under pressure. It’s so distracting and makes me angry. So I throw things and break stuff. 
But that’s pretty normal right?

Nick More than normal!!! it happen to everyone (think that in order to record a CD, usually it takes 3 days for 70 min of music...). Dont worry about it. There is, but, something you can do about it... the more you record yourself, the more used to it you are going to be. It is going to turn into something normal. This Pressure is going to be always there, the different is, how to cope with it. :)

Nick Yes! Things are different with a camera pointed at you!

Nick Is that an Alvarez Kazuo Yairi CY-116? I'm using one in the video submitted just before yours.

Steve Price Yup I copied you. I have a new 2020 CYM 75 also. That one is pretty loud. I bought this one in the 90's at some point. I don't remember exactly when.