Well done! I like the rain - is that live from when you were playing?
You seem to have the notes down well and the barres are played cleanly. Maybe you could work on phrasing? A first step would be identifying the phrases (I think they are every four measures in this piece). Then try just playing the melody line, giving it a bit of shape and contour, as if you were singing it, or even just speaking it. Then, try to carry that over into playing it with the accompaniment back in.